The Destructors...a script. [Archive] - FilmLeaf

Neoraptor25

07-21-2003, 01:16 PM

Donnie Darko. The first time i'd heard of Graham Greene's short story...the plot, about kids destroying an old man's house was so intriguing...and though the only thing i knew was the latter, i ended up imagining a film with the very same premise for an entire year;a month ago i wrote the first act. But now...i'm short of stuck, much like Jack Torrance was in The Shining. And in spite of having no wish to kill anyone, i guess i could use some advice on how to continue...or perhaps an evaluation of the 18 pages i've written so far. Please feel free to visit the link below:

http://www.msnusers.com/Neoraptor/Documents/The%20Destructors%2Fdes2.doc

P.S. I recently read the actual "Destructors". The only thing it shares with my work, is THE TITLE.

Johann

07-25-2003, 09:23 PM

Give us a sample. (I'll constructively criticise if you want)

Don't hold back. There are no bad screenwriters. Only bad scripts.